The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption in billion kWh of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the electricity used and produced by ten countries in the year 2014.
Overall
, China was on the top list of produce and consume energy. Also
, The United States of America was third and Germany was only the country that consumed more than the production of electricity. Whereas
, Korea was the lowest for both production and consumption of energy.
After analysis, it can be seen clearly that, China produced 5398 billion
kWh
and consumed 5322 billion
kWh
, which was the highest among all nations. The United States was the second on the top producing and consuming 4099 billion
kWh
and 3866 billion
kWh
respectively. In addition
, Russia and Japan were in third and fourth positions, the production and consumption of Russia was 1057 billion
kWh
and 1038 billion
kWh
respectively.Further
, Japan produced 936.2 billion
kWh
and consumed 856.7 billion
kWh
. In the list, India was in fifth position producing 871 billion
kWh
and using 698.8 billion
kWh
.
Furthermore
, Canada produced 618.9 billion
kWh
and used 499.9 billion
kWh
, which was higher than France's 561.20 billion
kWh
produced and used 462.90 billion
kWh
. Moreover
, Brazil produced 530.70 billion
kWh
and consumed 455.8 billion
kWh
.Additionally
, It is noticeable that Germany was only the country that consumed more electric energy and produced less. Lastly
, Korea was the last
country that produced and consumed the lowest 485.1 billion
kWh
and 449.5 billion
kWh
respectively.Submitted by rbtech65 on
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