The diagrams below show two methods of using water to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Hydroelectric dam

The diagrams below show two methods of using water to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Hydroelectric dam
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The diagram depicts the
process
of producing
electricity
using
water
.
Overall
, the
process
consists of eight stages in
hydro-electric
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power generation, starting with
water
evaporation and ending with
electricity
distribution. At the beginning of the
process
,
water
is evaporated under the sun from the sea, and
then
it is turned into a cloud by air pressure. After that, when the cloud is condensed, it becomes rain, which falls into the reservoir.
Next,
open the valve behind the dam and let
water
from the reservoir flow into the turbine to produce high-voltage
electricity
. The remaining
water
from the previous
process
is sent back to the reservoir by pumping for recycling in the same
process
. In the next stage of the
process
, high-power
electricity
is delivered to the transformer station by passing through the cables.
Then
, high voltage is transformed to be suitable for use in individual households. In the
last
stage of the
process
, practical electric power is distributed to end users
such
as residential units, factories, hospitals, and schools.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, electricity, water with synonyms.
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