The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the usage of geothermal energy in producing electricity. Based on the image, the process is divided into five steps where the first three actions happen underground
while
the rest of the process is conducted on the upper ground.
The first three processes that happen underground, start with cold Linking Words
water
pumped down to the 4.5 Use synonyms
kilometers
deep underground. Once the Change the spelling
kilometres
water
reaches the tip of the geothermal zone, it will pass through an injection well to enable the Use synonyms
water
to flow through the pipe Use synonyms
that is
surrounded by hot rocks in the Linking Words
center
of the geothermal zone. Change the spelling
centre
Subsequently
, the Linking Words
water
becomes boiled and Use synonyms
then
gets into the production well that pumps the Linking Words
water
up to the condenser.
The upper ground process is initiated when the hot Use synonyms
water
is accumulated in the condenser. Eventually, the boiled Use synonyms
water
transforms into steam that powers a turbine. As the turbine is loaded with steam, it will power the generator that Use synonyms
subsequently
produces electricity.Linking Words
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