The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the usage of geothermal energy in producing electricity. Based on the image, the process is divided into five steps where the first three actions happen underground
while
the rest of the process is conducted on the upper ground. The first three processes that happen underground, start with cold
water
pumped down to the 4.5
kilometers
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deep underground. Once the
water
reaches the tip of the geothermal zone, it will pass through an injection well to enable the
water
to flow through the pipe
that is
surrounded by hot rocks in the
center
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of the geothermal zone.
Subsequently
, the
water
becomes boiled and
then
gets into the production well that pumps the
water
up to the condenser. The upper ground process is initiated when the hot
water
is accumulated in the condenser. Eventually, the boiled
water
transforms into steam that powers a turbine. As the turbine is loaded with steam, it will power the generator that
subsequently
produces electricity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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