the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The bar chart illustrates the
consumption
and production
of electricity
in the top ten nations as well as
units measured in billions.
Overall
, it is clear that
China has the highest consumption
and production
of power as compared to other nations. Korea. Rep is the least production
and consumption
.
The highest consumption
and production
of electricity
in China, at 5.398 and 5.322 billion respectively. The United States has the second-largest current production
and use, accounts 4.099
and 3.866 respectively. Russia has similar manufacture and usage which is around 1000 billion Japan and India produced the minimum amount of Change preposition
for 4.099
electricity
as much as the consumption
.
In contrast
, Germany's consumption
of electricity
is more than production
, which accounts for 582.45 and 526.6 respectively. France, Brazil and Korea. Rep use and manufacture power is extremely lower
, especially Correct word choice
low
Korea
. Rep.Change preposition
in Korea
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