the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The bar chart illustrates the
consumption
and Use synonyms
production
of Use synonyms
electricity
in the top ten nations Use synonyms
as well as
units measured in billions.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
China has the highest Linking Words
consumption
and Use synonyms
production
of power as compared to other nations. Korea. Rep is the least Use synonyms
production
and Use synonyms
consumption
.
The highest Use synonyms
consumption
and Use synonyms
production
of Use synonyms
electricity
in China, at 5.398 and 5.322 billion respectively. The United States has the second-largest current Use synonyms
production
and use, accounts Use synonyms
4.099
and 3.866 respectively. Russia has similar manufacture and usage which is around 1000 billion Japan and India produced the minimum amount of Change preposition
for 4.099
electricity
as much as the Use synonyms
consumption
.
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In contrast
, Germany's Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
electricity
is more than Use synonyms
production
, which accounts for 582.45 and 526.6 respectively. France, Brazil and Korea. Rep use and manufacture power is extremely Use synonyms
lower
, especially Correct word choice
low
Korea
. Rep.Change preposition
in Korea
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