The charts below show the usage of coal, oil, hydropower, wind and renewable energy for fuel production, in 2002 and at present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These charts depict all the means which were used to produce
energy
in two different period
of time. Change to a plural noun
periods
Overall
, it can be seen that nowadays, the use of renewable sources of energy
has increased compared to the past, particularly the use of the wind.
According to
what is shown, fossil fuel
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fuels
such
as oil and coal used
mainly for Add a missing verb
were used
energy
production, as both of them represented 90% of the total production, in 2002.But, these days although
the ratio of the energy
which is produced by oil decreased by 5%, the percentage of using coal to generate energy
increases by 1%.
Regarding the
renewable sources of Correct article usage
apply
energy
, in 2002, they were responsible for approximately 10% of energy
production which generated
essentially from Hydropower and Add a missing verb
was generated
the
wind by, 8%, Correct article usage
apply
.8
% respectively. At present, they are still used with a minor increase Correct word choice
and .8
about
5% mainly in the Change preposition
of about
using
of the wind by around 4.2% increase.
Replace the word
use
To sum up
, we could say that even though nowadays, the use of oil and coal as a source of fuel are
reduced by about 4% which is Change the verb form
is
minority
compared to 2002, they are still the major sources of Add an article
a minority
energy
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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