The charts below show the usage of coal, oil, hydropower, wind and renewable energy for fuel production, in 2002 and at present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

These charts depict all the means which were used to produce

energy

in two different

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of time.

Overall

, it can be seen that nowadays, the use of renewable sources of

energy

has increased compared to the past, particularly the use of the wind.

According to

what is shown, fossil

fuel

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fuels

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such

as oil and coal

used

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were used

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mainly for

energy

production, as both of them represented 90% of the total production, in 2002.But, these days

although

the ratio of the

energy

which is produced by oil decreased by 5%, the percentage of using coal to generate

energy

increases by 1%. Regarding

the

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renewable sources of

energy

, in 2002, they were responsible for approximately 10% of

energy

production which

generated

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essentially from Hydropower and

the

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wind by, 8%,

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% respectively. At present, they are still used with a minor increase

about

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5% mainly in the

using

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of the wind by around 4.2% increase.

To sum up

, we could say that even though nowadays, the use of oil and coal as a source of fuel

are

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reduced by about 4% which is

minority

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compared to 2002, they are still the major sources of

energy

.