The given pie charts shows the proportion of British students able yo use languages other than english. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The given pie charts shows the proportion of British students able yo use languages other than english. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The
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pie charts display a comparison of British
students
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who were able to speak in other languages
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English between 2000 and 2010. In general, it can be seen that the highest percentages of Britain
students
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were capable
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of speaking
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Spanish only in 2000 and 2010.
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, the lowest was for
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other unspecified languages and German accents in 2000, but in 2010 there were three categories at the same proportions. The total number of British
students
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who were able to speak Spanish only was 30% in 2000; no other
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languages
placed in second rank with a total of 20%,
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by
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another languages
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and French only (15% each). The
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remaining categories
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contributed
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about 10% of the total percentages.
On the other hand
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, Spanish was the
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language
in 2010 calculated
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35%
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total
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the total
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population. The total number of
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who were able to
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another
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language
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was 20%;
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other
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languages
contributed
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15%. Three other accents had a similar number with 10% of each category.
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