The chart A illustrates the percentage of films screened in both the UK and Australia in 2006, while the chart B illustrates the cinema admissions in the UK and Australia between 1976 to 2006.
The
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Chart
chart
A illustrates the percentage of films
screened in both
the UK
and Australia
in 2006, while
the
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chart
B illustrates the cinema admissions in the UK
and Australia
between 1976 to 2006.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that US films
were the most shown films
compared to other films
in both
the UK
and Australia
, while
cinema admissions in both
countries experienced increasing trends between 1976 to 2006.
Regarding chart
A, the number of films
presented in the UK
was higher compared to Australia
except for other films
. The US films
screened stood at just below 80 percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
UK
and at approximately 65 percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
Australia
. UK
and Australian films
have similar trends in both
countries with UK
films
presented
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higher at approximately 21 Change the adjective
slightly
percent
. Other Change the spelling
per cent
films
show different trends at approximately 25 percent
of Change the spelling
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films
screened in Australia
and not reached at
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percent
in the Change the spelling
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UK
.
In terms of chart
B, the cinema admissions started at around 105 million
in the UK
in 1975. The graph
increased to approximately 125 million
before dropping to 50 million
in 1984. However
, the graph
started to increase significantly by 120 million
in 2003. This
is followed by a slight decrease in the next 2 years and ended at around 150 million
in 2005. The graph
in Australia
started at around 40 million
in 1975 and it is lower than the data in the UK
. Moreover
, the graph
started to increase gradually and reached around 40 million
in 1983. However
, it declined by 10 percent
in 1985 and rose back to 40 Change the spelling
per cent
million
in 1990. The graph
started to increase steadily and ended at approximately 80 million
in 2005.Submitted by tiana29.alisjahbana on
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