The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
The line graph illustrates the growth of the
population
(in billions) in India
and China
over a 50-year period between 2000 and 2050.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the number of people in China
will remain unchanged, after a gradual increase, while
the figure for India
is planning to have an upward trend throughout the period. Additionally
, the population
of China
was initially
higher, however
, India
's population
overtook the first place in the last
2 decades.
Looking at the details, the figure for China
started at under 1.3 billion
people and has risen continuously since 2000. The number is currently above 1.4 billion
, however
, experts predict that the number will have fallen negligibly by 2050.
In terms of India
, the figure started at 1 billion
, then
soared up until today. India
currently has approximately 1.4 billion
people, before growing upwards steadily according to
the expectations of experts.
In 2030, the population
of both countries is expected to be identical in 2030.Submitted by naira.gumar on
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