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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.
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The line graph illustrates the growth of the
population
 (in billions) in
India
 and
China
 over a 50-year period between 2000 and 2050.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the number of people in
China
 will remain unchanged, after a gradual increase,
while
 the figure for
India
 is planning to have an upward trend throughout the period.
Additionally
, the
population
 of
China
 was
initially
 higher,
however
,
India
's
population
 overtook the first place in the
last
 2 decades. Looking at the details, the figure for
China
 started at under 1.3
billion
 people and has risen continuously since 2000. The number is currently above 1.4
billion
,
however
, experts predict that the number will have fallen negligibly by 2050. In terms of
India
, the figure started at 1
billion
,
then
 soared up until today.
India
 currently has approximately 1.4
billion
 people, before growing upwards steadily
according to
 the expectations of experts. In 2030, the
population
 of both countries is expected to be identical in 2030.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, india, china, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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