The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008
The graph illustrates the share of the UK population who ate fruit and
vegetable
five times per day between 2001 and 2008. Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
Overall
, there was an uptrend over the entire period for all categories; the figures for children and men increased sharply, while
the share of women went up moderately.
The figure for children remained the lowest all over the time frame; it started at roughly 12% in 2001, remained constant until 2003 and then
grew with
a steady rate to about 25% in 2007. The share of men had a similar trend, but in 2001 it was around 17%, had no changes over Change preposition
at
next
2 years and Correct article usage
the next
then
it started to increment
rapidly to nearly 27% in 2007. Both segments of Verb problem
increase
population
suffered from a slight decline over Add an article
the population
last
year in the graph.
Correct article usage
the last
In contrast
, the percentage of women who ate five portion
of fruit and vegetables in 2001 was the highest, among other categories. Over time, it Change to a plural noun
portions
incremented
gradually between 2001 and 2006, from roughly 21% to about 34%, Verb problem
increased
while
in the last
two years it declined by almost 3%, remaining the highest figure in 2008.Submitted by pauly837 on
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