The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

There is a

system

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for

treatment

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the treatment

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of

rain

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rainwater

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water

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in an Australian Town. It is a very practical

system

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which starts with Rainwater falling down and being collected by a drain of each house

of

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in

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the village. When the

water

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is collected, it passes

througth

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through

a

water

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filter. After that, the

water

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goes to a very big storage which is connected with a

system

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of

water

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treatment.

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, when the

water

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arrives

to

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at

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this

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special storage, it is treated with chemicals designed

for cleaning

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to clean

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the

water

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of

bacterias

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bacteria

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.

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, when the

proccess

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process

is done, the

water

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is sent to the same houses across pipelines, ready

for being

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to be

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drunk. It is a

system

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based on the savings of natural resources and how people can take advantage of the weather and the natural conditions, so if you compare

this

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system

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with

regular

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a regular

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system

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, benefits are very significant for societies who are looking

for

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to

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save money or societies who do not have the facility of have drinking

water

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into their houses.