The diagram below show the stages in the erosion of a headland. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The image below illustrates the steps in the erosion of an area occupied by land.

Initially

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the

headland

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was a whole,

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the patterns of the climate changing, causing the cycle of the water to modify its trajectory, the waves

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to beat with force the cliff.

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,the weak areas started eroding,participating in the creation of a cave that

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to the appearance of an arch. With time, the arch has enlarged, creating a door in the middle of the

headland

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which can be dangerous. Eventually, the waves reached higher, beating it against the roof.

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, the remaining rocks in the

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fell, leaving behind a stack.

Finally

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this

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led the

headland

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to retreat, leaving out a stack

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stumps. Clearly, the

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would have remained unchanged if it had not been for the change of climate and the unpredictable cycle of that specific body of water.