The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the line graph depicts global
water
consumption
in 3 different sectors between 1900 and 2000, whereas
the table compares specific data about water
consumption
in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
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water
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water
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agricultural
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As shown in the line chart, agriculture has exhibited stable growth from 500 km3 in 1900 to over 1000 km3 in 1950. Not surprisingly, during a period from 1950 to 2000
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2000,
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figure experienced a massive growth by around 2000 KM3. Additionally
, domestic and water
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about 100km3 and 600km3, respectively.
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it is clear that
Brazil with population
of 176 million people consumed 50 Add an article
a population
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as Congo with population
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a population
5
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Finally
, Brazilian per capita water
consumption
stood at 8 m3 compare
with 359 m3 of Congo.
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