The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph
ilustrates
the rate of energy Correct your spelling
illustrates
usage
in USA
from 1980 to 2030.
Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
, Petrol and Oil will remained
Wrong verb form
remain
at
the most used energy Change preposition
apply
in
the end of the given period. Change the preposition
at
Meanwhie
coal and natural Correct your spelling
Meanwhile
gas
switched its position as the second and third sources
of power
. Nuclear, solar or wind, and also
power
seemed insignificant in number in comparison with previous kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
sources
.
To begin
with, petrol and oil usage
in 1980 was 35 quadrillions
and made as
the highest in the line graph. It experienced fluctuation Change preposition
apply
after
1980 until 1995, since Change preposition
from
then
it was
gradually Verb problem
has
increase
before 2025 and Wrong verb form
increased
expected
to reach to peak in 2030 with 45 Add a missing verb
is expected
quadrillions
usage
. Unlike those Change preposition
of usage
sources
of power
, natural gas
and oil swap its
rank in the quantity of Correct pronoun usage
their
usage
. Natural gas
was the second most used energy in 1980 with 20 quadrillions
, and coal was below it in
around 15 Change preposition
with
quadrillions
. However
, in 2030 it was predicted than
the proportion of people Correct word choice
that
that
will utilize coal higher than those who are using natural Correct pronoun usage
who
gas
.
On the other hand
, there is a group of infamous sources
of power
. That group consisted of Nuclear, Solar or Wind, and Hydropower. Those energies started with the same point in the graph, around 3 quadrillions
. While
nucleas
and solar or wind Correct your spelling
nuclear
nucleus
power
utilisation is
projected to be higher from the starting point, Change the verb form
are
hydprower
will Correct your spelling
hydropower
suffered
from a downfall in 2030.Change the verb form
suffer
be suffered
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