You want to complain about the service you received in the hotel you stayed in while attending a recent meeting . Write a letter to the person who organised the meeting . In your letter •Describe the meeting •Explain the problems with the service •Suggest what the meeting organiser should do
Dear Sir ,
I am writing
this
letter to express my deep grievances on the service that I took yesterday from your hotel duing
my meeting. I Correct your spelling
during
have
booked Unnecessary verb
apply
Royal
Correct article usage
the Royal
conference hall
two weeks prior to Correct your spelling
Conference Hall
launch
my hair products.
I have invited 35 professionals from Wrong verb form
launching
the
different Correct article usage
apply
part
of the country to attend Fix the agreement mistake
parts
this
meeting in order to see my company flourish also
I had great enthusiasm however
, I felt disappointed because the arrangements were terrible . Firstly
, the A.C
was not working well and ventilation was poor Correct your spelling
A.C.
thus
,all the guests felt suffocated.
Secondly
,a
vegetarian and Correct article usage
apply
a
non-vegetarian food were included in the package but only vegetarian cuisines were served Correct article usage
apply
hence
, your management ruined my whole day . I want you to refund my money because I do not feel satisfied also
,do improvise
Verb problem
improve
in
your organising skills so, other people will not face the same situation.
I am looking forward to hearing from you .
Yours faithfully,
SamChange preposition
apply
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to follow a structured approach in your writing. This means having a clear introduction, body paragraphs each discussing a specific point, and a conclusion. Your letter mixes complaints and suggestions without clear separation.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of linking words and phrases to better connect your ideas and ensure smoother transitions between paragraphs.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task by first briefly describing the meeting, then detailing the problems encountered, and finally suggesting specific actions for the organiser. Your letter mentioned the issues but was light on describing the meeting and the specific suggestions were not concrete enough.
task achievement
Maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter. While your tone was generally suitable, it could be enhanced with formal expressions of disappointment and more polite suggestions for improvement.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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