The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how coment is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram below illustrates the steps and equipment in the
cement
-making process
, and how cement
is used to make concrete for building purposes.
Overall
, there are 4 stages, 2 sources and 4 equipment in binder
production procedure. Meanwhile, concrete production has 4 resources, 1 equipment and only 1 step.
The Add an article
the binder
process
of making cement
procedure starts with sending limestone and clay into the crusher, after being crushed the powder is sent to the mixer and it is heated by the rotating heater. In order, to make the cement
, heated powder goes through the grinder. After all that process
, cement
is ready to used
for any construction aims.
During the Add a missing verb
be used
cement
production process
, all four ingredients of cement
(15%), water (10%), sand (25%) and gravel (50%) are mixed in a concrete mixer. After the following step, the concrete is ready to be consumed for building purposes .Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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