The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how coment is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how coment is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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The diagram below illustrates the steps and equipment in the
cement
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-making
process
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, and how
cement
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is used to make concrete for building purposes.
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, there are 4 stages, 2 sources and 4 equipment in
binder
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the binder
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production procedure. Meanwhile, concrete production has 4 resources, 1 equipment and only 1 step. The
process
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of making
cement
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procedure starts with sending limestone and clay into the crusher, after being crushed the powder is sent to the mixer and it is heated by the rotating heater. In order, to make the
cement
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, heated powder goes through the grinder. After all that
process
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,
cement
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is ready to
used
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for any construction aims. During the
cement
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production
process
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, all four ingredients of
cement
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(15%), water (10%), sand (25%) and gravel (50%) are mixed in a concrete mixer. After the following step, the concrete is ready to be consumed for building purposes .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • raw materials
  • grinding
  • heating process
  • kilns
  • clinker
  • gypsum
  • machinery
  • crushers
  • grinders
  • rotary kilns
  • ball mills
  • sand
  • gravel
  • versatility
  • civil engineering
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