The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts give information about the
proportion
of typical meals in Use synonyms
term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
sodium
, saturated fats and added Use synonyms
sugar
.
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Overall
, Linking Words
breakfast
contains the least Use synonyms
proportion
of Use synonyms
sodium
, saturated fat and added Use synonyms
sugar
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
dinner
contains the most Use synonyms
proportion
of Use synonyms
sodium
and saturated fat, Use synonyms
while
for added Linking Words
sugar
, Use synonyms
snacks
take up the largest Use synonyms
proportion
.
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Firstly
, the largest Linking Words
proportion
of Use synonyms
sodium
and saturated fat Use synonyms
linked
to Add a missing verb
was linked
dinner
about 43% and 37% respectively. In terms of Use synonyms
sodium
, Use synonyms
breakfast
and Use synonyms
snacks
consumed the least accounting for 14%.
And the percentage of Use synonyms
sodium
in lunch is 29% in the second rank. Use synonyms
Average
percentage of saturated fat is quite similar to Add an article
The average
sodium
. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
dinner
accounts for the largest part at 37%, followed by lunch , Use synonyms
snacks
and Use synonyms
breakfast
at 26%, 21%, Use synonyms
16
% respectively.
what's more, different from Correct word choice
and 16
information
mentioned above, the biggest part of added Add an article
the information
sugar
is Use synonyms
snacks
at about 42% Use synonyms
while
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dinner
is the second one at 23%, which Use synonyms
taking
up the biggest Change the form of the verb
takes
proportion
in other types of nutrients. The following two typical meals Use synonyms
is
lunch and Change the verb form
are
breakfast
accounting for 19% and 16%.
All in all, each kind of Use synonyms
meals
takes up at least 14% of these three types of nutrients. We couldn’t eat too much Fix the agreement mistake
meal
while
it may be unhealthy for us to Linking Words
consumes
too much of these nutrients.Wrong verb form
consume
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