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It is a positive thing that people who are in senior management positions in companies have much higher salaries than other employees in the same company or organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some
people
 think occupations in
corparations
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corporations
 which
includes
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high
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high-level
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level
management
 skills as job
description
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descriptions
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 should have large salary budgets. I totally agree with
this
 statement because of the responsibility these positions require and the
stress
level
it
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they
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gives
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 to
people
. One reason why I think employees who
works
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 in high-
level
management
depertments
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departments
 in corporations should have
high
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higher
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 incomes than
others
 is that they have extended responsibility compared to
others
. Positions
which
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do
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the
management
releated
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related
 actions have to make everything perfect because of their subject area, they are responsible
from
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 other employee's actions.
Thus
, if something goes wrong unexpectedly, everyone, especially the company itself thinks it is
due to
lack
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the lack
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 of managing quality that
branch
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the branch
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 has.
For instance
, a data leak in the company by someone can damage the company and through the organisation's eyes, the one to blame is always the supervisor of the leaker.
Other
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 reason that I think the
stress
level
 one has to deal with at a certain occupation in their job should be paid
as well as
 other skills. Usually,
high
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high-level
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level
 jobs
comes
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 with
its
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their
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diffulties
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difficulties
, and considering the fact that we
work
 to earn money, I think
this
 kind of
work
 should be paid
as
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 well. Both the high
level
 of responsibility and
helding
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holding
 multiple areas and ensuring they
work
 as they should
be create
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 an anxiety-friendly
environenment
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environment
environments
to
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 ones who try to overcome
this
 burden. So
that
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apply
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any kind of problem may appear anytime and anywhere, and
this
uncertainity
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uncertainty
 makes
people
 produce
stress
hormon
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hormone
hormones
 more. Regular employees only have to do specific tasks and when the task is achieved, they do not have to
stress
 about it.
However
, managers constantly have
stress
 because
work place
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the workplace
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 is usually dynamic and nearly every day there are new things to be done.
According to
Work
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a Work
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Heatlh
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Health
 survey,
for instance
, 80% of
the
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high-
level
 managers
is
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are
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 more likely to use psychiatric drugs for the
stress
level
 they have
while
this
 proportion is considerably lower for
people
 who need to meet defined tasks.
To conclude
, I believe
people
 who are responsible for
management
 of the certain branches in a
work place
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workplace
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 should be paid more than
others
 because they have more
stress
 and
responsibilty
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responsibility
 than
others
, and
therefore
 their salary should be higher than
them
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theirs
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.
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