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The charts below show the percentageof water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentageof water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts compare the
water
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 consumption of different
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use
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uses
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 including industrial
use
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, agricultural
use
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 and domestic
use
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 in six countries
including
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North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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 and South
Asia
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.
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, the vast majority of
water
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 was consumed in agriculture whilst that in
Europe
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 and North
America
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 was in industry.
According to
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 the information shown in the graph, over 70% of
water
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 was used in agriculture except for North
America
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 and
Europe
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 which was 39% and 32% only.
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, their industrial
water
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 expenditure was superior to the rest four countries which was 48% and 53% as much as ten times that in Central
Asia
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.
Besides
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, domestic
water
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use
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 was higher than industrial
use
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 in South
America
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, Africa and Central
Asia
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. What should be particularly mentioned is that the
water
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 distribution in North
America
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 was considerably similar to that in
Europe
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, america, europe, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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