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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagram illustrates the proportion of joblessness in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan between 1993 and 2007.
Overall
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, there was a decrease in the rate of people who had no job in the UK and the rest of Europe, with the figure for the latter being the largest from 1995 to 2007.
Conversely
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, an increase in the percentage of unemployment was seen in Japan. In 1993, 11% of joblessness was witnessed in the UK, followed by a significant drop before reaching 6%
at the end
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 of the period.
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, the proportion of unemployment in the rest of Europe started at 9% in 1993, after which it rose strongly to nearly 12% in 1997, before ending the duration at about 8%. The unemployment rate in Japan in the six first years was relatively stable from 2% in 1993 to 3% in 1997. In the next eight years, it fluctuated significantly in the range from 3% in 1999 to 4% in 2007.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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