One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports trainer. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. In your letter: say how well you know your friend describe the qualifications and experience that your friend has explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

this

letter to recommend my friend for a job at a summer school camp as a sports trainer

that is

required for

this

season.And I hope you will understand me.

Firstly

, I would like to say how well I know my friend. Nazar is my childhood friend and we studied in the same school

also

. He was so interested in football, so after finishing

the

Correct article usage

apply

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school he decided to be one of the local football club's

player

Fix the agreement mistake

players

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which's called-"Mash'al"

In addition

this

, Nazar has a really good experience in training younger students because he has worked as a football trainer for the

last

3 months. He didn't see enough career growth experience with his current employer and that's why he would like to switch his job. I believe Nazar is the best choice for

this

position as he has a lot of experience in his previous role. Thank you for

attention

Correct pronoun usage

your attention

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and consideration and I look forward to your response. Yours faithfully Feruzabonu

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Task Achievement

To enhance your score in task achievement, try providing more specific examples and details about your friend's qualifications and experiences. Mentioning specific accomplishments or relevant certifications can strengthen the recommendation.

Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea, but also try to connect these ideas more smoothly to create a more cohesive letter. Transitional phrases between paragraphs could improve the letter’s flow.

Tone and Register

Your greeting and closing are well done, but you could improve the letter's professionalism by avoiding phrases like 'And I hope you will understand me.' which can seem informal or unclear in this context.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

171 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

ardent enthusiast
physical education
sportsmanship
pragmatic approach
diligence
team spirit
engaging personality
mentorship
leadership qualities
communication skills
first-aid certified
discipline
adaptability
youth mentor
enthusiastic
influential coach
role model
positive reinforcement
camaraderie
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