The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Thailand who visited four different places in Bangkok. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Thailand who visited four different places in Bangkok.

Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the data about the guests of Thailand who visited cities
such
as
Bangkok
, Sea World, Wax Museum, and
Chinatown
from 2014 to 2017.
Overall
, most of Thailand's
travelers
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visited
Chinatown
in 2016.
While
the least visitors were seen in
Bangkok
Zoo in 2017. In 2014, 50% of foreigners visited
Bangkok
, which is the second-highest amount of total tourists in Thailand. The maximum proportion of visitors are seen in Seaworld(70%)throughout the period given. And the lowest percentage of tourists was seen in
Chinatown
followed by the year.
On the other hand
, the proportion of visitors to
Chinatown
in the next year(2015) was significantly higher than the previous year.
Whereas
the total number of foreigners to
Bangkok
Zoo declined slightly. From the chart, we observed that the minimum number of foreigners looked up in 2017 in three cities
such
as
Bangkok
Zoo, Sea World, and
Chinatown
. In 2014 and 2017, the same amount of tourists saw the Wax Museum and Sea World.
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