The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Thailand who visited four different places in Bangkok. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar chart illustrates the data about the guests of Thailand who visited cities

such

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Bangkok

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, Sea World, Wax Museum, and

Chinatown

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from 2014 to 2017.

Overall

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, most of Thailand's

travelers

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travellers

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visited

Chinatown

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in 2016.

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the least visitors were seen in

Bangkok

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Zoo in 2017. In 2014, 50% of foreigners visited

Bangkok

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, which is the second-highest amount of total tourists in Thailand. The maximum proportion of visitors are seen in Seaworld(70%)throughout the period given. And the lowest percentage of tourists was seen in

Chinatown

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followed by the year.

On the other hand

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, the proportion of visitors to

Chinatown

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in the next year(2015) was significantly higher than the previous year.

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the total number of foreigners to

Bangkok

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Zoo declined slightly. From the chart, we observed that the minimum number of foreigners looked up in 2017 in three cities

such

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Bangkok

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Zoo, Sea World, and

Chinatown

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. In 2014 and 2017, the same amount of tourists saw the Wax Museum and Sea World.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bangkok, chinatown with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

165 words

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