The table below gives information on the gender, marital status and age of employees working in retail and manufacturing industries of a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives the data about the percentages on gender, marital status and age of the
employees
in the retail and manufacturing sector of an unknown country.
Overall
, It can be seen that retail industries have the highest number of females and married employees
as compared to manufacturing industries whilst, the average is higher in manufacturing.
In the retail sector, there is a difference of 9% between the number of male and female employees
while
in manufacturing, it is 30%.
In terms of marital status, the percentage of single employees
is nearly two-fifths in retail,
and just over a third in manufacturing industries. Remove the comma
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On the other hand
, married workers contribute 61% and 69% in the retail and manufacturing sectors respectively.
Percentages of the employees
between ages 28-29 and 40-61 are higher in both sectors around 28%-36%. Other
age groups like 16-27 and 52-61, figures lay in between 7% and 25% in each sector. Change preposition
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On the other hand
, the least number of workers are around age 62 and more. The total average is 40-44 in retail and manufacturingSubmitted by sandhuarsh1320 on
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