The chart below shows the percentage of river water in UK rivers that is classified as having good chemical quality between 1990 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates
database
for the rates of river Correct article usage
the database
water
which was regard
as having good chemical quality Change the form of the verb
regarded
water
in the UK from 1990 to 2002.
Overall
, while
almost regions
Correct determiner usage
all regions
also
experienced an increase after over 10 years, the opposite was seen in the
Wales. Noticeably, the lowest belonged to England during the period of time.
Starting with 92%, the rate of good elemental quality Correct article usage
apply
water
in Nothern
Ireland Correct your spelling
Northern
turn
down by 7% in 1992 before rising significantly to over 95%, Wrong verb form
turned
surpassed
Scotland in the following 2 years. Wrong verb form
surpassing
However
, after exhibiting a dramatic raise
in the end to 98%, Correct your spelling
rise
this
figure witness
a drop to under 85%, and became the Change the form of the verb
witnessed
least
in 1996. Correct word choice
lowest
Additionally
, accounting for 82%, the proportion of good chemical conditions water
river
in England, which was the minority, less Fix the agreement mistake
rivers
15
% than the highest. Over the first 8 years, Change preposition
than 15
this
figure just saw a little change around 2%, before growing sharply to 90% and maintaining at that level until 2002.
On the other hand
, Wales and Scotland made up 97% and 95% respectively, during the
nearly a century, these Correct article usage
apply
figure
Change the determiner
figures
were
almost Unnecessary verb
apply
remain
unchanged, just have onlyWrong verb form
remained
1
% decrease in 1998 Correct article usage
a 1
of
Scotland. From 1999, Change preposition
from
whereas
Scotland’s rate climb
moderately by 3% and Wrong verb form
climbed
stablized
that Correct your spelling
stabilized
stabilised
figures
Fix the agreement mistake
figure
to
the end of Change preposition
by
given
time, Wales’s proportion witnessed a gradual fall to 93%.Correct article usage
the given
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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