Some people say that people should have a different amount of holidays according to their job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Whether or not, to allow

workers

to have different

quanity

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quantities

of

holidays

based on their

job

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is

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emerged as a controversial topic of interest .

This

writer claims that

due to

the demand

of

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relaxation from employees , they should be given a

reseaonable

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reasonable

amount of breaking days within their occupation despite the fact that

this

will lead to

the

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decrease of working

quality

It is vital to understand that giving an ideal

amout

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amount

of

holidays

to

workers

must be

benefical

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beneficial

as it provides chances for them to recharge their energy .

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is because , based on the

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of the

job

which

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the

workers

have to handle , it is easy to

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that the more workload they gain from the

job

, the more tired they will be .

Thus

, the thought of providing

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quanity

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quantity

quality

of

holidays

which link to the contribution they make for the whole

company

must be reasonable and necessary as

this

will offer a relaxing duration for the exhausted

workers

to recharge their energy , being ready to bring new benefits to the

company

.

For example

, S-Channel is the pioneer in the trend of giving

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amount of

holidays

based on the worker's contribution which

do

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not only enhance their working

quality

but

also

provide

opportunity

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for them to take off some stream .

However

, some suggest that

this

will cause

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the

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decline

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of

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working

quality

, The core reason behind

this

curtain is how they

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that

workers

have

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tendency

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to put no more

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efforts

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on

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their occupation as soon as they take

holidays

which will harm not only their working

quality

later but

also

the whole income of the

company

.

Nevertheless

,

this

is a misunderstanding as the whole picture is the

company

can offer a

holidays

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schedule for the

employess

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employees

in order to set a reasonable duration between the breaking and working days .

Therefore

, no longer do they worry about the

job

's

quality

or total income . In conclusion , having breaking days based on the

job

is said to

cause

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harmful

effect

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effects

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on working

quality

, yet it is more likely

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beneficial

benefical

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beneficial

since

this

will recharge the worker's

quality

, helping them do better

job

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jobs

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in

company

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later