The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women working hours per week. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Part 1 The bar chart compares the percentage of men and women in terms of engaging in daily physical

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in 2010.

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it is clear that

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majority

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the majority

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of males aged 15 to 24 were the most active accounting for 52.8%. And the most active women were 45 to 54 years old, who accounted for 53.3%.

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, males gradually lost

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in physical

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by the time they were 44 years old as the figure decreased from 52.8 to 42.2 and 39.5

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.

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, from the age of 45 onwards, there was a rise in male

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, with the numbers rising from 43.1 to 45.1 and

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46.7%. Meanwhile, ladies'

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in physical

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steadily increased between 15 to 44, with values rising from 47,7 to 48,9 and 52,5%.

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, beyond the age of 45, ladies'

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in physical

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began to wane, with values dropping from 53.3 to 53 and

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47.1%.

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, women aged 65 and over were the least active accounting for 47.1 percent. (165 words)