The bar chart provides information about the level of female unemployment in four parts of the United Kingdom between the years of 2013 to 2014

The bar chart provides information about the level of female unemployment in four parts of the United Kingdom between the years of 2013 to 2014
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The bar chart illustrates the level of women who are not being employed which is based on the four parts (England, Wales, Scotland,and Northern Ireland) of the UK from 2013 to 2014.
Overall
, In 2014 Northern Ireland had the lowest rate of suspension
whereas
Scotland had the topmost joblessness. In 2013 Wales had the lowest unemployment
in contrast
England had the highest dismissal.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unemployment rate
  • temporal trends
  • regional variations
  • economic policies
  • industry growth/decline
  • educational opportunities
  • social implications
  • gender equality
  • workforce participation
  • family income
  • employment opportunities
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