You and your friend have both been accepted to a study abroad programme in Paris France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter : Congratulate him/her for also being accepted Ask him/her if she would like to be your roommate Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follow: Dear,
Dear Mitali,
How are you? It's been a
while
hasn't it.
The Change the punctuation
?
last
time have
been final exams.
I can't express my feelings of happiness after hearing the news of your selection in Change the verb form
has
same
institute Correct article usage
the same
thats
of mine in Paris . I'm proud that you got selected that's all because of your Correct your spelling
that's
hardwork
. As you were not a book Correct your spelling
hard work
catterpiller
in school it might have been difficult for you to attain Correct your spelling
caterpillar
this
position. Anyway, I'm congratulating you from the core of my heart.
One of the other thing
Change to a plural noun
things
i
was thinking Change the capitalization
I
is
to Change preposition
about is
book
the Wrong verb form
booking
appartment
for staying. If you Correct your spelling
apartment
appointment
dont
mind Correct your spelling
don't
will
you like to join me as a Wrong verb form
would
roomate
there? As we both are from Correct your spelling
roommate
same
community and Add an article
the same
know
each other Wrong verb form
have known
from
childhood, it will be easier to adjust.
I heard it's a beautiful tourist attraction we might plan to visit the Ifel Change preposition
since
tower
and other historical buildings. We can study together and even find Capitalize word
Tower
job
easily. I Add an article
a job
will
love to learn new dishes there we Wrong verb form
would
gonna
join cooking classes Wrong verb form
are going to
to
and Correct your spelling
too
adding
regular gym Wrong verb form
add
in
Change preposition
to
schedule
. would be fun!
Speak to you soon,
AkshaAdd an article
the schedule
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coherence cohesion
To enhance your letter's coherence and cohesion, focus on smooth transitions between paragraphs. Though the letter discusses several points, making clearer connections and using transition words (
coherence cohesion
Ensure a single, focused idea per paragraph. Each paragraph should clearly address one aspect of the letter's purpose (congratulation, roommate proposal, activity planning). This will improve clarity and flow.
task achievement
Your completion of the task is commendable, as you address all required points. For further improvement, consider providing more detail or examples about the proposed activities and how they would be enjoyable or beneficial to both of you.
task achievement
Adopt a more consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. Though mostly suitable, some phrases may seem a bit informal or too casual for this context. Aim for a warm, friendly tone that maintains a level of formality appropriate for written correspondence.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,