The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The figures illustrate the life cycle of a species of fish, which is known
salmon
. There are three main steps to grow up, namely Change preposition
as salmon
fry
, smolt and adult
salmon
.
Overall
, the salmon
eggs become 3 different categories during grow
up. They spent about 10 years to be Change the form of the verb
growing
adult
salmon
.
Firstly
, its eggs become fry
for 5-6 months. They stay at river
with fast blowing for 4 years. Interestingly, when it is Add an article
the river
fry
, its length was
just 3-8 cm. Wrong verb form
is
Then
, it is changed to smolt. Secondly
, it lives around the sea for 5 years, which is the longest time to process. Its length increases slightly from 3 to 15 cm during the "fry
to smolt" change. Finally
, it becomes adult
salmon
, which is the last
process. Moreover
, this
process is going on, while
the creatures are bringing up sharply to 70-76 cm. Once the fish matures and is now an adult
salmon
, it produces eggs, and the period continues.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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