The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003.

The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003.
The pie chart displays the
number
of energy namely
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hydropower
hyropower
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power
, oil , nuclear power, coal , and natural gas in a country from 1983 to 2003
Overall
, the
number
of oil on top
in
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of
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the chart the
number
of oil stated 42% in 1983 . After which
this
figure decreased to 38% in 2003 . The
number
of coal began
23
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at 23
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% in 1983 and
then
this
type fell
shaply
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sharply
to 13% in 2003 . The proportion of
hyolropower
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hydropower
not change in 20 years. The
number
of natural gas and
nuchear
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nuclear
power all increased quickly. Natural gas's started 11% in 1983 .
Ater
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which
this
type grew quickly to 21% in 2003 . And nuclear
power's
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powers
power
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began at 20% in 1983
after
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and after
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20years
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20 years
this
figure increased slowly
24
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to 24
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% .
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