The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003.
The pie chart displays the
number
of energy namely Correct your spelling
hydropower
hyropower
, oil , nuclear power, coal , and natural gas in a country from 1983 to 2003
Correct your spelling
power
Overall
, the number
of oil on top in
the chart the Change preposition
of
number
of oil stated 42% in 1983 . After which this
figure decreased to 38% in 2003 . The number
of coal began 23
% in 1983 and Change preposition
at 23
then
this
type fell shaply
to 13% in 2003 . The proportion of Correct your spelling
sharply
hyolropower
not change in 20 years.
The Correct your spelling
hydropower
number
of natural gas and nuchear
power all increased quickly. Natural gas's started 11% in 1983 . Correct your spelling
nuclear
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which Correct your spelling
After
this
type grew quickly to 21% in 2003 . And nuclear power's
began at 20% in 1983 Change the noun form
powers
power
after
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and after
20years
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20 years
this
figure increased slowly 24
% .Change preposition
to 24
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