The diagram belows shows the stages in recycling aluminum drinks cans.
The provided flowchart illustrates how
aluminum
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aluminium
drinks
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drink
cans
are recycled.
Overall
, the process involves ten different steps, beginning with waste collection by a truck and ending with cans
being passed through a rolling machine to make the final products. The total process takes six weeks to complete.
Firstly
, used drinks cans
are collected as waste and deposited in a factory. After that, water is used to wash dirts
off used Change the wording
dirt
specks of dirt
cans
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the third step, Change preposition
In
cans
are crushed Correct your spelling
into
in to
blocks of Correct your spelling
into
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the aluminum
an aluminum
aluminum
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aluminium
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fragments
fragment
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fragments
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and then
then
they are processed in a separate plant, where Correct word choice
and then
colors
are erased chemically.
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colours
Subsequently
, heat is used to turn aluminum
blocks into liquid, which is poured into a Change the spelling
aluminium
mold
to produce uniformly shaped Change the spelling
mould
cans
. The moulded products are then
weighed and passed through a rolling machine to produce perfect cylinder cans
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