The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The two given diagrams illustrate how the town of Stromer from 1995 has developed until now.
Overall
, The town has undergone a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which are the mass forest in 1995 was split into many pieces, and the farmland was
decreased in size, which all are
turned into other scientifically organized facilities catering for residents' lives.
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north-west
, the house has been reconstructed into two modern apartments, which was accompanied by the small remaining forest by the right side. Meanwhile, the forest in the centre-west was cut down into a straight line to provide more vacant space for more shops and one school in the centre replacing the house in 1995. Down to the south, most of the farmland has been reduced Correct your spelling
northwest
lands
significantly, after that converted into more shops and accommodations.
In the east-south above the farmland, a house was built up, Change preposition
to lands
while
the wooded area has been chopped down into small one
fitted with area, those empty space from it was erected an airport.Fix the agreement mistake
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