The chart gives information about how much energy of different categories produced in France over the period of 5 years.

The chart gives information  about how much energy of different categories produced in France over the period of 5 years.
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The Pie charts illustrate the energy
production
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of various sectors in
france
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France
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between 1995 to 2005.
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, in almost both charts the majority was in coal
production
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.
Whereas
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, the others had a smaller percentage in
production
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.
According to
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charts
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the charts
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, the dominant position went to
coal
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the coal
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sector, making up 29.80% and 30.93% respectively in 1995 and 2005.
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, others reported the least energy
production
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in both years.
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,it was followed by gas, which was around 29.63% in 1995 and it
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to merely more than 30% in 2005 as the second most dominant category in all the periods. In terms of petro
production
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, it contributed practically over a quarter in 1995 and approximately 20% in 2005
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nuclear was the second lowest
catetory
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category
in both years.
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