The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows how a geothermal power station operates and
generating
electricity through different steps. The cold Wrong verb form
generates
water
stored in a tank is sent underground through a pipe,the
cold Correct word choice
and the
water
is pumped down 4.5 kilometers
deep under the Change the spelling
kilometres
earth
Change noun form
earth's
surface
. Then
, the hot water
is pumped back to the surface
through another pipe. When reaching the surface
, the hot water
transforms into steam
due to
its high temperature. This
steam
help
spin a turbine which Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
help
Change the verb form
helps
producing
electricity. The power station functions by moving around the cold Wrong verb form
produce
water
underground, heating it, returning it to the surface
, converting it into steam
, and send
the Wrong verb form
sending
steam
to generate power.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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