Writing task 1 The graph below shows the percentage of river water in the UK that is of good chemical quality, in the period between 1990 and 2002.

Writing task 1 

The graph below shows the percentage of river water in the UK that is of good chemical quality, in the period between 1990 and 2002.
The line diagram illustrates the percentage amount of good chemical quality in four regions of the United Kingdom
rivers
from 1990 to 2002. From an
overall
perspective,
it is clear that
Wales was the best
water
substance in 1990,
then
had a negative trend,
while
Scotland and Northern Ireland became the highest quality
rivers
in 2002.
To begin
with, England contained the poorest
water
composition in 1990,
then
it fluctuated until reached its peak in the next decade, which accounted for 90% and remained stable for two
years
later.
On the other hand
, Wales which was previously graded as the most qualified for its river chemical, fell down continuously from 1998 until four
years
later with approximately 93%. For Scotland, it was constant in six
years
with 94,5%, which was slightly declined in 1998 and the lowest point of its performance.
Furthermore
, it grew positively in two
years
at almost 98%,
then
constantly became one of the best
rivers
' compositions.
On the other hand
,
rivers
in Northern Ireland struggled with the better-qualified
water
, with their fluctuations in six
years
since 1990, reaching the bottom at 82%.
However
, it rose significantly until became the highest level of chemical
water
in 2002, the same as Scotland.
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