The graph below shows the percentage of river water in the UK that is of good chemical quality, in the period between 1990 and 2002.
The line diagram illustrates the percentage amount of good chemical quality in four regions of the United Kingdom
rivers
from 1990 to 2002.
From an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, Linking Words
it is clear that
Wales was the best Linking Words
water
substance in 1990, Use synonyms
then
had a negative trend, Linking Words
while
Scotland and Northern Ireland became the highest quality Linking Words
rivers
in 2002.
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To begin
with, England contained the poorest Linking Words
water
composition in 1990, Use synonyms
then
it fluctuated until reached its peak in the next decade, which accounted for 90% and remained stable for two Linking Words
years
later. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Wales which was previously graded as the most qualified for its river chemical, fell down continuously from 1998 until four Linking Words
years
later with approximately 93%. For Scotland, it was constant in six Use synonyms
years
with 94,5%, which was slightly declined in 1998 and the lowest point of its performance. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, it grew positively in two Linking Words
years
at almost 98%, Use synonyms
then
constantly became one of the best Linking Words
rivers
' compositions.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
rivers
in Northern Ireland struggled with the better-qualified Use synonyms
water
, with their fluctuations in six Use synonyms
years
since 1990, reaching the bottom at 82%. Use synonyms
However
, it rose significantly until became the highest level of chemical Linking Words
water
in 2002, the same as Scotland.Use synonyms
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