The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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information about the relation between age and crime and types of crime in the UK for the previous

year

.

Overall

,

it is clear that

the biggest number of

crimes

were committed by people between the ages of 16 and 24.

In addition

, the major type of illegal activities for

past

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year

were violent

crimes

and the lowest proportion was for problems with

the

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public order. First of all, it can be seen that children start to engage in illegal activities at

age

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of 12 with around 5

tens

of thousand violations.

Subsequently

, at 16, with a dramatic rise in numbers, they reached 70

tens

of thousands. The peak of

crimes

for the past

year

was 80

tens

of

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thousands

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and was made by

20

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year

old individuals, followed by 60

tens

of thousands

crimes

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people at 24 and a sharp decline afterwards. About

one half

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of the

crimes

committed

last

year

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violent

crimes

at 46%, followed by drug and property illegal activities, at 22% and 23% respectively. Only 9% of the violations were public order.