The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the percentage of earnings that families in five European nations spend on
food
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and beverage, accommodation, clothing and amusement per month.
Overall
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,
food
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, beverage and accommodation are the major expenditures in all five nations.
Turkey
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and the UK have the largest share in
food
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and beverage and housing respectively
while
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the households which spend the most on clothing and amusement is Germany. Starting with the dominant areas of expenditure, the UK, Germany and France spend the most on housing between 37% and 31%
while
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Turkey
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and
Spain
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spend less than 20%.
In contrast
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, spending on
food
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and drink in
Turkey
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and
Spain
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is higher at 36% and 31% than the other three nations, all of which have less than 27%. Turning to minor spending categories, the smallest proportion of income is spent on clothing in France and
Spain
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with 7% and 8% respectively. Its expenditures in the other three countries range from 11% to 15%. Regarding the percentage of amusement, Germany has the largest share with 19%
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only 10% is invested in
Turkey
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. The spending in France, the UK and
Spain
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vary in between.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, turkey, spain with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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