The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the percentage of earnings that families in five European nations spend on
food
and beverage, accommodation, clothing and amusement per month. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
food
, beverage and accommodation are the major expenditures in all five nations. Use synonyms
Turkey
and the UK have the largest share in Use synonyms
food
and beverage and housing respectively Use synonyms
while
the households which spend the most on clothing and amusement is Germany.
Starting with the dominant areas of expenditure, the UK, Germany and France spend the most on housing between 37% and 31% Linking Words
while
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Turkey
and Use synonyms
Spain
spend less than 20%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, spending on Linking Words
food
and drink in Use synonyms
Turkey
and Use synonyms
Spain
is higher at 36% and 31% than the other three nations, all of which have less than 27%.
Turning to minor spending categories, the smallest proportion of income is spent on clothing in France and Use synonyms
Spain
with 7% and 8% respectively. Its expenditures in the other three countries range from 11% to 15%. Regarding the percentage of amusement, Germany has the largest share with 19% Use synonyms
whereas
only 10% is invested in Linking Words
Turkey
. The spending in France, the UK and Use synonyms
Spain
vary in between.Use synonyms
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