The chart below shows the percentage of members of parliament who were women in 5 regions, compared to the percentage worldwide.
The presented chart
expresses
the percentage of members of Verb problem
shows
parliament
who were women in 5 regions, compared to the allotment worldwide.
Overall
, woman
from Germany, Italy, Fix the agreement mistake
women
France
had Correct word choice
and France
highest
positions at the beginning. Correct article usage
the highest
However
, the percentage of woman
from Belgium Fix the agreement mistake
women
had
fluctuated. Meanwhile, Unnecessary verb
apply
woman
from Fix the agreement mistake
women
Correct article usage
the Uk
Uk
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UK
increase
gradually.
Italian Wrong verb form
increased
woman
from Fix the agreement mistake
women
parliament
started with the highest attitude from the inception. German woman
started their job in parliament
with
33% in 2000 Change preposition
at
then
boosted quickly till 2012 with 41%. Woman
from France initiation started Fix the agreement mistake
Women
with
25% Change preposition
at
then
went up gradually 27
% in 2004 afterwards their percentage soared considerably Change preposition
to 27
with
29% in 2008 Change preposition
to
subsequently
Correct word choice
and subsequently
also
increased quickly with
32% in 2012.
Change preposition
to
Belgium
women Change noun form
Belgium's
from
Change preposition
in
parliament
had
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apply
rise
progressively Replace the word
rose
then
in 2004 till
2008 Change preposition
to
with
28% Change preposition
apply
had
remained the same but Unnecessary verb
apply
in
2008 Change preposition
from
till
2012 Change preposition
to
decrease rapid
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decreased rapidly
with
22%. Women from Change preposition
to
Correct article usage
the Uk
Uk
started Correct your spelling
UK
with
4% in 2000 Change preposition
at
then
improve
sharply Wrong verb form
improved
with
9% in 2004 Change preposition
to
subsequently
shot up speedily with
20% in 2008.Change preposition
to
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