The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate how the wave-energy
machinary
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machinery
generates power
along with
its location options for the installation.
Overall
, the
machine
perceives
two
sources of energy to produce electricity with
two
preferences
area
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to install it. Basically, the installed wave-energy
machine
receives power sources from
two
directions, upper and lower. On the upper side, the cold air will flow through a designated entrance, which later causes the turbine to move and produces hot wind as the
outcomes
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that is
driven outside the
machine
. Concurrently, the
machine
also
receives energy from the wave beneath it. The strong current that successfully reaches the underwater chamber causes the level of collected water
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rises
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until it creates a strong hot air flow that will move the turbine, which produces cold air
that is
released back to the underwater chamber. Regarding its location, there are
two
options to install the
machine
.
First,
it can be placed close to the seashore, with a low installation cost.
However
, it will not receive a strong current that produces low output in the end. If one wants to produce
a high outcomes
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of
electricty
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electricity
,
then
it should be put far from the seashore, with;
nevertheless
, a pricey cost of
installment
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.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, two with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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