The chart below compares the percentages of tourism dollars spent in different economic sectors in two time periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

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data demonstrated a comparison of the percentages of tourism dollars spent in various economic sectors in two time periods.

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, it is obvious that the tourism sector has a significant impact on employment situations of different industries

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as agriculture, food, and related parts. At a glance, it indicates the percentage changes in both the reduction and growth of U.S. employment in two time periods. The remarkable increase from 11.8 million jobs at food services, eating, and drinking places reached 21.1 million, approximately 2 times. But there is a considerable decrease in other sectors so that they

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off by roughly half compared to the previous statistics.

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, farms that placed 2.6

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of U.S. employment dropped to 1.3

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, it can be seen that food and beverage stores changed from 3.3

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to 1.7

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, it witnessed the same reduction

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other industries.

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Topic Vocabulary:

percentages
economic sectors
distinct time periods
priority
focus
increase in tourism spending
percentage rise
luxury tourism
technological advancements
decreased
tourist preferences
economic downturns
efficiency
reduce costs
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key trends
experience-focused sectors
decline
traditional hospitality
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The chart below compares the percentages of tourism dollars spent in different economic sectors in two time periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animal and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

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