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The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given process diagram illustrates two processes. First of
all
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 it demonstrates the life cycle of a
silk
 worn and
then
 various levels done for the production of
clothes
 made from
silk
.
Overall
, 10-12 weeks are required for the life cycle of
silk
 worn and it consists of four stages .
Further
, five
process
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 take place in the making of
silk
clothes
.
To begin
 with,
firstly
 a month lays eggs in a large amount and after 10 days , larvas
comes
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 out of the eggs and
starts
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start
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 eating mulberry
leaf
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leaves
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 as a source of food. Afterwards of 4-6 weeks , larvas produces
silk
 thread in
a
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apply
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large
quantity
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.
Then
 , as 3-8 days
passes
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 by the larvas make a cocoon in which they live and after 16 days they
becomes
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 a mother and the life cycle of silkworm continues in
this
 way again and again
However
, for making
silk
clothes
 it is essential to select
good
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a good
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 quality
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of
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cocoon and boil it
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into
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 hot water.
Furthermore
, the cocoon
gets
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unwind
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 as a single but large thread and its length would be 300-900 meters . Following these , many threads are twisted together or
weave
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 together to make
silk
 cloth
as well as
it
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dyed in a container for producing different colours of
silk
clothes
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words silk, clothes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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