The chart below shows the proportions of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.

The chart below shows the proportions of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.
The given bar chart illustrates the proportions of
students
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both genders who majored
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6 different subjects in a particular school
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UK
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the UK
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by 2011
Overall
, it can be seen that the
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majority of
students
who enter these subjects
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female with the exception of Art and Design where male
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took over .
Additionally
, Language and literature
was
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the subjects with most male and female
students
choosing
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. With regards to the majors where more much more female
students
studied than male . Taking a look at Linguistics and Philosophy ,
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accounted for about 250% and 150%
female
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of female
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students
studying
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was 100% higher than male ones . Meanwhile , English language and literature had an identical pattern but just
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disparity with 230% male and 250% female entering the course . Turning to the remaining majors where there was a smaller difference between male and female
students
. Focusing on History and Archeology
as well as
Communication and Media Stud , both of them saw a similar trend
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comprising
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more than 100% and 200%
females
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students
compared to just 90% and 200% male undergraduates .
By contrast
, Art and
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Design
made up 150% female
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was 20% less than the male
students
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