The chart below shows the proportions of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.
The given bar chart illustrates the proportions of
students
with
both genders who majored Change preposition
of
at
6 different subjects in a particular school Change preposition
in
of
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in
UK
by 2011
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the UK
Overall
, it can be seen that the the
majority of Remove the redundancy
apply
students
who enter these subjects was
female with the exception of Art and Design where male Change the verb form
were
student
took over . Fix the agreement mistake
students
Additionally
, Language and literature was
the subjects with most male and female Change the verb form
were
students
choosing
.
With regards to the majors where more much more female Wrong verb form
chose
students
studied than male . Taking a look at Linguistics and Philosophy , they
accounted for about 250% and 150% Correct pronoun usage
apply
female
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of female
students
studying that
was 100% higher than male ones . Meanwhile , English language and literature had an identical pattern but just Correct pronoun usage
which
slight
disparity with 230% male and 250% female entering the course .
Turning to the remaining majors where there was a smaller difference between male and female Correct article usage
a slight
students
. Focusing on History and Archeology as well as
Communication and Media Stud , both of them saw a similar trend with
comprising Change preposition
apply
of
more than 100% and 200% Change preposition
apply
females
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female
students
compared to just 90% and 200% male undergraduates . By contrast
, Art and Deisgn
made up 150% female Correct your spelling
Design
students
that
was 20% less than the male Correct pronoun usage
which
students
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