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The chart below shows the proportions of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.

The chart below shows the proportions of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.
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 both genders who majored
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 6 different subjects in a particular school
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UK
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 by 2011
Overall
 , it can be seen that the
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majority of
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 female with the exception of Art and Design where male
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 took over .
Additionally
 , Language and literature
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 the subjects with most male and female
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. With regards to the majors where more much more female
students
 studied than male . Taking a look at Linguistics and Philosophy ,
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accounted for about 250% and 150%
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 was 100% higher than male ones . Meanwhile , English language and literature had an identical pattern but just
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 disparity with 230% male and 250% female entering the course . Turning to the remaining majors where there was a smaller difference between male and female
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 . Focusing on History and Archeology
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 Communication and Media Stud , both of them saw a similar trend
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comprising
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more than 100% and 200%
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students
 compared to just 90% and 200% male undergraduates .
By contrast
 , Art and
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Design
 made up 150% female
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 was 20% less than the male
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