The graph below shows changes in young adult unemployment rates in England between 1993 and 2012.
The graph below depicts the trend in young adult unemployment rates in
England
from year
1993 to 2012.
Overall
, the unemployed young adult
between the ages 16 to 24 were at the highest in London as compared to those who are Fix the agreement mistake
adults
at
the other parts of Change preposition
in
England
. There is also
a slight difference among the jobless individuals all over London than in the rest of England
.
In details
, there Fix the agreement mistake
detail
showed
a decrease in Verb problem
was
unemployment
rate among individuals Correct article usage
the unemployment
aging from
16-Wrong verb form
aged
24
from the Change preposition
to 24
year
1993 to 1999 with its lowest at approximately 15%. A peaked
in the rate is seen Change the form of the verb
peak
on
the latter part of the Change preposition
in
year
with 25% on
2012. Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, other parts of England
also
showed the same trend with the lowest recorded at around the year
2021 with about 10
% unemployment rate. Correct article usage
a 10
While
the highest is recorded on
2011 with 20%.Change preposition
in
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