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Some business observe that new employees who just graduated from a college or university seem to lack interpersonal skills needed for communication with their colleagues. What could be the reason for this? What solution can help address this problem?

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These days, most young employees seem to not have the skills to communicate with their
colleagues
. Individualism and the habit of studying on their own could be the reasons for
this
 problem. The solutions ,
however
, could be to encourage team spirit through
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 during the studies or to organise seminaries at
work
 to introduce them to the team. Individualism is the main issue of today's society which leads people to think and even to
work
 on their own. Especially at university, students are used
studying
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 and doing research by themselves.
In other words
, colleges or universities ask them to provide individual
work
 to be able to mark them objectively.
For example
, when students have to make a presentation or take an exam, they do it without any help. Another reason to take into consideration is youth; when we are young, we are as not as confident as a mature person. We need to adapt to a new situation which can intimidate us.
For instance
, new
colleagues
, new tasks and new rules may fear most of us. Solutions could be found to solve
this
 problem. Some companies organise some meetings or lunches with all employees in order to introduce new
colleagues
, which can encourage people to
work
 and communicate together.
For example
, seminars or special outings are a good way to create a link between workers.
Not to mention
 that
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 during studies have shown better employment after graduating and better adaptation to a new job. In conclusion, new employees who just graduated do not communicate easily with
colleagues
 because of
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 used to
study
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 or
work
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 alone.
However
, some solutions like encouraging team spirit
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through
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 the company or during the studies
,
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 could be a smart manner to resolve
this
 issue.
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