The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the comparison of the amount in one country's export production in Petroleum
products
, Engineered goods, Gems and jewellery, Agricultural
products
, and Textiles from 2015 to 2016. It is noticeable that the highest of thing
exports
was petroleum
products
.
By contrast
, the lowest of good
exports
was textiles. Regarding
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evidence of foreign
products
, the amount of product
exports
by petroleum
products
increased from 60
billion
dollars
to 65
billion
dollars
.
Then
, the gap between Engineered goods which was 10
billion
dollars
during the period 2015 and 2016 higher than other categories.
Moreover
, the number of Gems and Jewellery dropped from 43
billion
dollars
to 40
billion
dollars
.
On the other hand
, The Agricultural
products
were almost steady at 30
billion
dollars
over the period of 2015.
Furthermore
, The textiles
exports
during the period 2015 and 2016 significantly skyrocketed from 25
billion
dollars
to 33
billion
dollars
which was the range of one years approximately 7
billion
dollars
.
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