The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the comparison of the amount in one country's export production in Petroleum
products
, Engineered goods, Gems and jewellery, Agricultural products
, and Textiles from 2015 to 2016.
It is noticeable that the highest of thing exports
was petroleum products
. By contrast
, the lowest of good exports
was textiles.
Regarding from
evidence of foreign Change preposition
apply
products
, the amount of product exports
by petroleum products
increased from 60 billion
dollars
to 65 billion
dollars
. Then
, the gap between Engineered goods which was 10 billion
dollars
during the period 2015 and 2016 higher than other categories. Moreover
, the number of Gems and Jewellery dropped from 43 billion
dollars
to 40 billion
dollars
.
On the other hand
, The Agricultural products
were almost steady at 30 billion
dollars
over the period of 2015. Furthermore
, The textiles exports
during the period 2015 and 2016 significantly skyrocketed from 25 billion
dollars
to 33 billion
dollars
which was the range of one years approximately 7 billion
dollars
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