Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both therse views and give your own opinion.

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times, the majority of employees intend to work for fixed corporations,

while

others assert that it is better to change jobs if needed.

This

essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives before concluding that I am in

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the latter notion. On the one hand, it is understandable why individuals who insist on being loyal workers could be advantageous to a certain extent. First and foremost, it could guarantee the stability of

staffs'

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lives.

For example

,

besides

their basic salaries, experienced employees could receive additional bonuses as a tribute to their dedication, which could help them easily cover their daily costs,

such

as accommodation, food, and bills.

Furthermore

, taking part in only one firm could support workers

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successful career paths.

This

is because without worrying about

financial

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burden, members of the company could focus on studying a particular field more deeply, thereby leading them to become professional experts

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also

taking on higher positions in the firms.

On the other hand

, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that altering different organisations could have significant benefits. One rationale is that it could improve jobholders' wages. In fact, they are likely to be paid higher than their current payments when they change jobs,

thus

,

this

is an opportunity to raise their incomes

as well as

the quality of their lives. Another justification is that new workplaces could provide a better developing environment. To be more specific, jobholders could find

suitable

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company that

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their aims,

such

as broadening experiences, learning relevant job skills, and creating networking, which could play a role as motivators and satisfactory to encourage

staffs

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to work more efficiently. In conclusion,

while

it is irrefutable that staying in the same enterprise for the whole life brings numerous valuable results, I would contend that entering alternative organisations is more beneficial.