Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There are two controversial perspectives heading a debate over who should be

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responsibility

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of

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minimizing

packaging

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the packaging

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of

goods

.

While some

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claim that manufacturers and supermarkets should put effort

to decline

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the packaging of

goods

. The others make a statement that it is important for clients to limit the number of items with various packaging.

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each has its own merit I consider it

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optimal to combine both mentioned ideas On the one hand, I think companies should have a sense of responsibility to protect the

environment

from destruction by searching and deciding what

goods

should not

use

plastic to package. Because many customers don’t know the harm of those things

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the

environment

, firms should spend their time finding more effective and environmentally friendly packaging

with

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the

goods

they sell and pack.

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instance

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they can

use

eco-friendly materials, reuse

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to produce

the

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packaging

On the other hand

, consumers

also

have the significant accountability to protect our earth from

further

polluting

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by limiting the purchase

for

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products that do not

use

recyclable materials. As a matter of fact, many companies in

this

day and age don’t care about the

environment

and they put their benefits first. So by boycotting some

goods

produced by firms that do not take the

environment

seriously, the consumers can put pressure on those companies and force them to

use

bio-friendly materials or reduce the amount of packaging. In

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conclusion, with a view to protecting our earth from

destruction

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destruction,

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both corporations and consumers should join hands and make better changes

on

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the

use

of packaging

that is

used to package

goods

.