The maps show the transformation of the village of Eastminster over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the transformation of the village of Eastminster over a ten year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
The area below depicts the changes in the village of Eastminster over a ten-year term. Looking at the Northern part of the village Houses there experienced an expansion, and
by
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this
park in the northeast corner was reduced by
this
. A Large house with gardens was replaced by a Hotel with a golf course, the same situation was experienced by Woodland, and
instead
of it in 2009 it became an Adventure park. Analyzing the opposite part to the north, the hospital was expanded,
a
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and a
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school
that is
right next to it was relocated and replaced by a Shopping complex.
Also
, in the southeast corner streets of houses became Apartment blocks. Houses, factories, and warehouses
took
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place there, public garden was demolished by those changes. The only thing that was stable through the years was the Railway station.
To conclude
, through the years the village of Eastminister experienced
an
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urbanization and
construction
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the construction
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of new facilities, some places were demolished but others stayed in the city and were relocated.
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