The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the
the
figure of people who visited the museum in various seasons in Remove the redundancy
apply
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
of
2005. Change preposition
in
Overall
, the rate of people who went to the building in the summer is more than winter
. Change preposition
in winter
Farther more
, most people visited the place at 12 pm.Correct your spelling
Furthermore
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