Some people believe that governments should invest more in public transportation systems to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. Others argue that the focus should be on improving roads and highways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In contemporary society, there is an ongoing debate whether the investment

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public

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should be valuable to lower hazardous pollution or other think that improves in

roads

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as important. In

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. One on hand,

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the idea of adding more funds

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public transportation systems have been discussing throughout the years.

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, in developed countries, there are plenty of public carriages to provide citizens

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approach accessible movement from city to city but

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on

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assume to spend more funds to improve some facilities like proper chairs, clean stations, good interior designs can make them feel comfortable and enjoyable, which

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can reduce vehicle traffics which makes bad air pollution in return. In terms of improving

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always been on the list, regarding

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excessive private

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in sort of communities. The government, in

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case, should obtain profitable investors because it requires millions of money that can affect

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the national monetary. Either way, adding some

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pros

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the quality of

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travel

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because they can choose whether to use public

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or personal cars.

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leads to

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troubles in some aspects. In my opinion, I’m not

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some

roads

and highways can be

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option, but in terms of investment

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transportation, I prefer if the government should put the amount of money

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public transportation because it presumably decreases any

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vicious risks to the environment and people’s health. In conclusion, I believe that

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public carriages can bring plenty of advantages for some

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rather than spending more money to build

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roads

which may

can

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cause

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risks in the long term.