You have seen an advertisement for part-time job at a restaurant and want to apply for it. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: -describe your experience -tell him why you are interested in the job -say why you think you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Sir or Madam,
The reason why I am enthusiastic application. He said ,
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problem
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day
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apply
work
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restaurant
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previous
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is me
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my
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advertisement
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advantage
,
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. Correct your spelling
interesting
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part time
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a part-time
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experience
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experienced
work
.
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The manager
,
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work
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,
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,
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happy
.
I am waiting for your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Rustamova Dilnoza.Change the word
happily
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logical structure
Ensure the letter has a clear structure, with an introduction, body paragraphs each focusing on a distinct aspect of your application (experience, interest, suitability), and a conclusion.
greeting and closing
Start the letter with 'Dear [Manager's Name]' if known, or 'Dear Manager,' and conclude with 'Yours sincerely,' or 'Yours faithfully,' followed by your name. These greetings and sign-offs are more appropriately formal.
single idea per paragraph
Dedicate each paragraph to a single idea. For example, one paragraph for describing your experience, another for explaining why you are interested in the job, and a third for why you believe you are suitable.
complete response
Directly address all the bullet points given in the task. Make sure to mention your experience, why you are interested in the job, and why you consider yourself suitable. Provide clear examples and explanations.
suitable writing tone
The letter should be written in a polite, professional, and enthusiastic tone. Ensure grammar and vocabulary choice reflect this, avoiding slang or overly casual language.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.